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Warning: 2P!Hetalia, so expect blood and creepy talk.

   You were a trade for mastermind Luciano Vargas. An evil man with odd colored eyes and a switchblade hobby for young women. When the law put him out of business with his partners in crime, he had no choice to yield to it or face prison. Since everyone is scared of him, no one dares to kill him. His new hobby of making a "contract", where he keeps a person for a week to be his servant, comes to you when you trade yourself for your little sister's place at Luciano's mansion. But Luciano feels something he never felt before. You are not just one of the girls that he's taken as a servant or killed before. Is this a sickness? Who is this mysterious man whose personality ranges from cold to killer? Will you live to find out?

"What?!" Gilbert yelled. "This is outrageous! Why? Why would he want you?"
   Gilbert paced around the kitchen that you all were in. While you and Alfred sat at the kitchen table, Gilbert hadn't sat down once. He was concerned for his friend of nine years.
   Both Alfred and Gilbert were like the bigger brothers you never had. You met in elementary school when a bunch of bullies attacked you. They were the kids of thugs that didn't care about your screaming or cries of help to teachers. They beat your hand with a rock. As they bullied you, Alfred jumped on one kid and wrestled him to the ground. Gilbert was on the other side of the playground when he saw Alfred beating up some kids. Realizing what happened, Gilbert went over to help the little boy and girl. Together, they scared off the bullies and got you to the nurse. The skin on your finger had been opened to the point where you could see the bone. You were taken to the hospital for stitches. You became friends with Gilbert and Alfred after that. You called the scar on your finger your "friendship scar", since it was that accident that brought you and your friends together.
   But this was no bully. This was Luciano.  This was a criminal mastermind who was still alive just because everyone was afraid of him. You didn't know what kind of crimes he commited. Your small pond that you lived in didn't have room for the big bad fish like Luciano, so therefore, you didn't know about him.
   "I don't know." You said answered Gilbert's question.
   "Can't we go and save you? Like heroes?" Alfred asked. Alfred was always wrapped up in the ideas of super heroes and war heroes. After high school, he wanted to go into the army so he could be a hero himself.  
   "No." You said. You felt bad. Your friend couldn't help you out of this one.
   There was a moment of silence. "You're going to miss the ball…" Alfred said.
   Your heart tore at the thought. Bummer…you never got a chance to see if Arthur would ask you out.
   "But he'll return you alive, right?" Gilbert asked.
   "I think so." You said. "He's just…he's a madman! I don't want to be there."
   "But if it will be over soon…" Gilbert shrugged the thoughts off his shoulders. "I don't like this. Not one bit."
   "I feel the same way." You said.
   "Damn it!" Alfred said. He slammed his fist on the table.
   "I-I have to go now…" You whispered. You hugged your best friends and walked up to your room as they showed themselves out.
   Your sister ran to you in the hallway and started crying. Your parents just explained what would happen to you with Luciano while you were talking to your friends in the kitchen.
   "Don't go!" Lizzie said. Her little hands clung to your shirt and she wept into your stomach, the highest place she could reach.
   "Liz, don't cry." You said. You picked up your sister and carried her to your room. "I'll be fine."
   You sat on your bed with your sister. It was like old times, where your sister would read you a short stories while you did your homework. You would praise her for the story even though your time for homework went down the drain. You didn't care. Family meant so much more than homework.
   "But you won't be here." Liz wailed.
   "How about this: you help me pack and I'll help you with your hair for Halloween?" You said.
   "Ok." Your sister whispered.

   Dinner was quiet. So was everything else. No one wanted to talk about it. As soon as you got upstairs to your room, you collapsed on your bed and broke down. Everything you would leave behind! All the people! What if Luciano lied and you never came back, the last memories you would have would be about living in the ugly yellow and black mansion. You didn't want to go. Never.

   "Why is ___________ crying?" Luciano yelled at Chiku.
   Chiku didn't even flinch. "Because she is sad."
   "Well, go make her un-sad! I don't like it when girls cry! They're so loud." Luciano frowned.
   "Don't we have to wait until morning to make contact with her?" Luzifer asked.
   "I said tomorrow, not the morning! We take the girl at midnight and let her leave a good-bye note." He got up from the desk. "I need to do something. You can find me in the garden if you need me."
"Yes sir." Chiku said.

   You were sleeping soundly when you felt a hand over your mouth. Your eyes shot open and you looked up to see the man in the black military suit look down at you.
   "You are coming with us." Chiku said. "Leave a note."
The thing with the bullies actually happened to a little kid I know but she was in kindergarten. Can you believe that?! A little kid getting beaten up like that?! It's insane...
I'll update tomorrow since this one was short. :) I promise you'll be in Luciano's house soon.

Cover art is by: :iconhetalia-robyn-chan:

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Ch.3: Right behind you
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You belong to :icon2pitaliaplz: :iconsaysplz: "I can't wait to see you at my place! This will be fun~!"
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Applejack1111 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
"Well go make her un-sad!"
I said Oh Luciano, how much I love you~ out loud and had a mental fangirl moment. Then my cat was looking at me weirdly, as if to say "What.. are you doing, useless being? " Hehe...
TicciTimber Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
"Well go make her un-sad"

wow really man, REALLY that's the weirdest thing said and it sounds whiny and childish
CrazyHetaliaLover13 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DAMMIT!!! I looked again!
hetalianminecrafter Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ch.3: Right behind you

Is this a reference to Team Fortress 2?

I'm sorry if not
KyoukoOrihara Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
"Why would he want you?" 
Is it bad that my thought when I read that was; Thank you Gilbert, for making me feel like no one would ever want me.
MurasakiRose080 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I thought the same exact thing. I would've smacked him upside the head for that. (:
XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
   "Why is ___________ crying?" Luciano yelled at Chiku. 
   Chiku didn't even flinch. "Because she is sad." 
   "Well, go make her un-sad! I don't like it when girls cry! They're so loud." Luciano frowned. 

Well, mister, I cry cause I can. XD Also, it is kinda obvious why I'm crying
TicciTimber Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
It sounds whiny and childish
whocaresaboutmyuser Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
My parents must be geniuses considering they named both of their girls Elizabeth but luck fully I go by Bella
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
They must have a thing about constancy XD
jeffthekillerlove12 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
Slenderman: annoyance
Me: chappy
Slenderman: Fine Fine
Me: I'M COMING LUCI *has a shank *
KathyBrine Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student Writer
And I can't wait too, Luci~..... *silent evil laugh and holds a small dagger behind me*
neigma Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student General Artist
I can't help but think that those little bullies were Luciano, Chiku, and Luzifer...
RubyBadAppleDream Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Student Artist
MiraakTheDragonborn Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Luci better have some chocolate and cupcakes...
Bleached-Angel Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Student Writer
if inwas there when that happened. I would of been beyond angry or mad or pissed. My blood would of been boiling and I would of brought out a knife and killed all the bullies. Well really I would Pi. them all down and give each of them my signature mark. A black eye with a bloody nose and a cut lip. Maybe even a purple cheek. (please excuse my language). Damn bullies go to hell.
animeloverforlife3 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
(Come back covered in blood)
Me: here slender txt me when you ok
Slender: nods
Me:(shuts door)
Veronica: hi psycho
Me: hi did you have fun
Veronica: yes
14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
ah shit run for your lives!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Animeangel12131 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
cool story and it's true some kids are such little pricks i've had more then my fair share of bullies and fights so i'm speaking from experiance ^_^
sarpndo Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
Very cool. Luciano, of course I'm sad.
Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Oh~ I would go so willingly~ Though saying farewell to my friends would be hard. Eh~ Sacrifices have to be made.
MintbunniesWTF Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
When Luciano was like why is she crying go make her un-sad I was like aww <3, then he was like girls are loud when they cry...sweet moment ruined good job Luci your a prick. xD
AnnabethChase01 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Most girls cry loud. I cry soft XDDDD
TicciTimber Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Me too
Bleached-Angel Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Student Writer
I cry softly as well.
AnnabethChase01 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I don't like loud criers :/
Bleached-Angel Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student Writer
ha my friends sister is LOUD. If she got a scrapped knee. Not even ear plugs can block that noise. Not even the sound of a tank with speakers blaring right in your ears could block it out.
TicciTimber Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
XD WTFW really!?
WTFW=What The Fluffy Waffles
AnnabethChase01 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Holy shit XD
Bleached-Angel Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student Writer
LulzAwesomeCakes Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
XD agreed~
MintbunniesWTF Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Renyaatem Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is good!
SuperAwesomeDia Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But seriously
Keep writing~!!
SixDripsOfCirrus Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
SuperAwesomeDia Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
DIS FIC! :iconiamleneededplz:
SixDripsOfCirrus Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
zombieslayer284 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
No it won't you're taking me away Feli :iconcryforeverplz:
DarkHikariDevil Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
-was gushing out random happy gibberish-

I keep loving this more and more~~
shadowleira Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012   Writer
XD this is going to be interesting no?

And a goodbye note would /definitely/ solve all my problems... *eye roll*
DenimPanda Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
lolwut? You guys watch me while I cry? IF YOU DON'T LIKE WHEN I CRY THEN DON'T SPY ME PERVERT! baka...

lol it's getting interesting!
NostaligicDreamer Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can't wait either! :eager:
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